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Condemned

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You can't depend on broken kin,
There's nothing they can do.
If they cannot help themselves,
Then how can they help you?

You can't look to a higher guide,
To tell you what to do.
They don't respond, they don't exist,
They can't be there for you.

You can't dream of a brighter future
and hope things turn around.
It's heavy now, it will be then,
It's going to weigh you down.

You can not search inside your head
For a resolution,
You're dead inside your heart and soul,
Your mind is pure pollution.

You can not contemplate your past,
To help you find the answer,
It got you to where you are now
That won't be much help either.

You can not turn to suicide,
To help end all your pain,
If you don't fix this struggle now,
It could repeat again.

You must not reach out anywhere,
Be stuck with your repentance.
There is no reason. Is no rhyme.
Just carry out your sentence.
Edited 2 Dec 2015 
For when you get straight down to hell 
It all begins again

changed to 

If you don't fix this struggle now,
It could repeat again.

An improvement? 
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MozartsNemesis's avatar
love the rhythm here, it flows so wonderfully, and the message of despair is almost choking. wonderfully written.