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The muscle can tear and heal like magic
Stronger than ever before,
I ponder the fact and I think it's tragic,
The mind cannot be restored.

Once attacked; damaged, broken, despaired,
Like cancer, can spread to the soul.
So complicated yet can't be repaired,
It threatens to swallow you whole.

No pills, no plasters, surgery, casts.
And it cannot heal on its own.
So how to protect it I must ask,
To a danger of which we're all prone?

Sin and tragedy, suffering, pain.
We must take the bad with the good.  
And since we are human I question again,
Because I've never quite understood.

Resisting corruption, you'd have to be blind.
Wear a shield for the rest of your life.
Or Strengthen and train, this muscle, your mind.  
Protect it from tragedy's knife.

Beware over-lifting for it could still tear,
This burden of life is no sport.
When you feel yourself buckle and you cannot bear,
Reach out and ask for support.

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:icontylerp1991:
tylerp1991 Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thas a good poem miss :iconimhappyplz: :squee:
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ravingroshie Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thankyou so much
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tylerp1991 Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yupps :)
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:icontwistedchick2:
love love love this its just wow!!
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ravingroshie May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thankyou so much miss :)
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:iconstarell:
I really love the rhyme scheme! The message has really got me thinking which is just great!
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CuddleSlut17 Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very well written. The 5th stanza is my favorite. Good job.
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ravingroshie Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thankyou! I'm glad you like it!:)
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ElektrikDawn Apr 23, 2013  Student Writer
I loved it!! You are an excellent poet!!
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ravingroshie Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wow...thankyou so much :) This means a lot !!:)
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